oops that was me i forgot to log in :roll:
At least he doesn’t want to kill me :) He wouldn’t mind you dead.
Just a couple of questions/comments:
Is this a paper on the History of Iraq or Saddam Hussein? Or just modern history of Iraq?
Because your paper quickly turned into a paper on a possible war on Iraq/terriorism/gulf war. You briefly mention the history in the beginning then that’s it. What about the Sarcens, the Ottomen Empire and the effects of the crusades, etc.???
Also, about Saddam, you left out his fascination with Stalin and Stalinist regimes. Also how he gained power, when as Bathe (sp) party leader he had all his opponents dragged out of the assembly and killed.
And it was HIS invasion of Kuwait that led to the Gulf war and the fact that Saudi Arabia was next. Ooops, getting off track.
My point is if this is a history paper on Iraq make sure you cover more then the last 30-40 years and don’t turn it into a “why we shouldn’t attack” paper or an “anti-republican/Bush” paper, unless of course that is the topic. If this is a factual history paper, it should be based on facts and not your own political beliefs. If it is and opinion paper then never mind.
Oh, and Saddam had the 3rd (I think) largest army in the world (in 1991) not the the deadliest. Sorry, off topic again.
Not a Paper on the History of Iraq. It is a paper for History class. This Paper is ment to debate should we go to war with Iraq or not. I put some history into the Introduction to set the scene.
Okay, never mind.
It is a good opinion paper and will certainly spark debate. :wink:
CC, you are a god! Thanks so much for your help! (and I did mention Canada in the final draft).
No yanny he doesnt want me dead, he says if i ever try to get in power he said “Ill take u down, cus ur weak and im strong” but i get along with The note very well. as a matter of fact. yesterday b4 class started, i wrote Mike Owns Mr Note in big letters on the board. i also wrote Mr note is small lol he thought it was funney and left it on the bard for his next class to see
May I quote you “And I think all leftists should be erraticated”. And may I quote his response “if you ever try to act on any of your views, I’m going to take you down!”.
first things first i qrote that essay when i was tired i wasnt realley thinking about what i was writing lol and Mr note and I joke about that all the time, he laughs and gives me one of those ur weird looks lol. he doesnt want to kill me but he wants to kick the poop out of me in a boxing match lol
May I quote you “And I think all leftists should be erraticated”. And may I quote his response “if you ever try to act on any of your views, I’m going to take you down!”.
and i didnt say that i said " The more Leftists/Liberals there are the harder it will be when the time comes to Eradicate them" and then i put the Fascist Axe and sticks at the bottom of the paper :P
CC, you are a god! Thanks so much for your help! (and I did mention Canada in the final draft).
no problem - glad i could be of assistance. If it was a more “scientific paper” i might have been more effective, but you have a good writing style overall, so it was easy.
What grade are you guys in?
approximately grade 21
10th
And it was HIS invasion of Kuwait that led to the Gulf war and the fact that Saudi Arabia was next. Ooops, getting off track.
The invasion of Kuwait started the second gulf war. The first was started by the Iraqi’s invasion of Iran, Iraq being strongly backed by the US at that time.
Yep also 10th
welll immore like 9.8 cus im still in some Freshmen classes :(
Isn’t that a little short to be a term paper? :)
Call it a report then :) Was only supposed to be 750 words. Mine though is about 1400.
Never use the pronouns “I” or “we” in an essay.
