I finally had time to sit down and write out proposed rules as clearly as possible. Please critique and offer suggestions.
Page 31, 7.8 Technologies, Advanced ASW
“Defending convoys gain +1 to their convoy escort modifier roll.” For clarity, would recommend eliminating “escort”. Should read, “Defending convoys gain +1 to their convoy modifier defense roll.”
Page 31, 7.8 Technologies, Radar
With the current errata, the rule reads, “Defending convoys gain +2 to their escort modifier roll.” For clarity, would recommend changing “escort” to “convoy.” Should read, “Defending convoys gain +2 to their convoy modifier defense roll.”
Global War Tech Sheet, Page 1, Advanced ASW
“Defending convoys gain a +1 to their convoy raiding roll.” Would recommend eliminating “a”. For clarity, would recommend changing “raiding” to “modifier”. Should read, “Defending convoys gain +1 to their convoy modifier defense roll.”
Global War Tech Sheet, Page 2, Radar
“Defending convoys gain +2 to their escort modifier roll.” For clarity, would recommend changing “escort” to “convoy.” Should read, “Defending convoys gain +2 to their convoy modifier defense roll.”
Table 9-8 is perfect and needs no corrections.