Much is said, I might want to give my 2 cents.
First of call a big praise to Mr Roboto, finally someone invests some effort to keep strategy discussions alive. great job!!! :-) :-) :-)
I do not want to focus on the way criticism is transported but about the format of the analysis.
the point is: I think on One might imo save time and effort by waiving a turn by turn by country analysis of every move. The reason is that without studying the game file many of the comments can not be brought into context unless opening the game file and then the information is present anyway and does not need to get summarized.
So what would I have in mind? Could it save the reviewer some time and effort if he/she would describe the general game setup in the beginning in a meta story and from there only mention turns where the reviewer thinks he wants to comment on.
Just some examples:
The game characteristics are that Germany went for a Cairo first approach after taking SF G1 while Japan decided to DOW3 and kept pressure on China. Russia built an early bomber and kept an offensive 1/3 Inf, 1/3 Mech 1/3 art approach for a couple of rounds. US played a KJF approach in the first 4 rounds while the Chinese were wiped out in Sze by an airstrike in J2. UK played a standard 97 attack and focused on the middle east and the SA IC in the early rounds.
OR
Germany played super hard G1 ground only purchase DOW Barbarossa sending Air to France and attacked only sz111 around UK accompanied by a J1 DOW by Japan. Russia turtled and US played a balanced approach. Things became messy in the Pacific while the Germans were steaming to Moscow, however UK/US started early to harass in the West.
OR
This is a sea lion game. After a fleet build 110/111 G1 with good dice for the Germans, UK decided to build fleet and almost no ground in UK. Germans took UK G3 with 6 tanks remaining. Japan did DOW3 and invaded Amur J1 pushing the Russians back therefore giving up any threat on India in the early game.
US went hard to keep the threat to reclaim UK
The advantage could be that this is written withing minutes and it still gives the reader what kind of game this is. Assuming one day many of such reports exist one would have the chance to pick a certain game such as DOW1 Barbarossa or J1 DOW or sea lion or “standard” Barbarossa.
From here it could be an advantage to not have the need to comment on every single turn but to either:
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Comment meta strategy such as “given the strong China the Allies did a great job in turn 2 by buying fast units with UK Pac which later would act as tanks combined with Chinese can openers” OR "in turn 7 the US switched theaters entirely and moved the entire Pacific fleet to the Atlantic
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Make comments when you think they are necessary:
UK3: I think UK Pac should have bought
US4: I think the blocker in sz25 was an unnecessary as the Japanese couldn’t have afforded to attack the Hawaii seazone anyway as they would be annihilated in a counter attack
Ru5: You retreated from Bryansk although the Germans would have had only 40% to attack
Or any kind of comment you made in any of the turns
I just learned from other strategy game communities I was in that many ideas died in case they were linked to a lot of afford and that any kind of strategy discussions or analysis lasted the longer the less effort was necessary to do them.
Maybe this could give some input to not only create a great format but to reduce the burden to do such analysis:)
Last point: In case the analysis is done for games that ended already I think attaching the final game file in the OP is best.
Cheers,
Tobias