I enjoyed reading this. It was well thought out, and had some humor splashed in. It is very Larry like, as he has set the table in a similar style.
I agree that something more could be said about the the UK split capital/income. It is the first time that the UK can continue to build/fight if London falls through India and the Anz.
You have to say something about Russia getting a BB (if its only to make fun of the situation).
When you get to the axis I think the Sea Lion attempt is note worthy (even for beginners). Italy reaching its potential is also going to play into how well the axis do. Japan will have new challenges. Looking forward to seeing how the other shoe falls.
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By the way I like the color coding of the powers, but not sure if there are enough colors that will show up from what we are given. The shade of green for the Chinese opening doesn’t show up very well. UK should be more of a tan, but again not sure if the beige will show up.