well not really. Its too ambiguous sounding.
yeah they are points not text, I try to use italics when I reference actual text
anyway first up is transport as a passive occupying unit
(we’ll do submarine as a passive occupying unit later)
point: *friendly naval units may move through SZ occupied by hostile transport only, during non-combat move
currently, under Phase 3: Combat Move, Naval Movement
Naval units may go through sea zones consisting of only hostile Submarines and/or Transports.
propose, under Phase 5: Non-Combat Move, I’ll add
Naval units may go through sea zones consisting of only hostile Transports.
point: *friendly naval units may retreat to SZ occupied by hostile transport only, during conduct combat
currently, under Phase 4: Conduct Combat, Naval Combat: Retreat Decision, Defender Retreat, I’ll add
Retreating naval units may retreat to any adjacent friendly sea zones.
propose, change it to
Retreating naval units may retreat to any adjacent friendly sea zones, or adjacent hostile sea zones occupied by submarines only.